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Teenagers
A slow kiss
clothes peeling off
bodies smooth
sliding close
in tune with the music
on the car radio.
Shirt buttoned wrong
pants zipper down
hair all a mess
mom and dad frown
girl gets pregnant
shotgun wedding bound.
clothes peeling off
bodies smooth
sliding close
in tune with the music
on the car radio.
Shirt buttoned wrong
pants zipper down
hair all a mess
mom and dad frown
girl gets pregnant
shotgun wedding bound.
Published 14th Nov 2023
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14th Nov 2023 4:04am
14th Nov 2023 4:45am
14th Nov 2023 4:09am
Damn! Until the last two lines it was sounding ok. I like how you describe how reality can hit. Skillful writing definitely.
14th Nov 2023 4:46am
14th Nov 2023 12:04pm
Woah.
And thus hits reality, just as Billy said.
This short little poem packed a punch.
And thus hits reality, just as Billy said.
This short little poem packed a punch.
14th Nov 2023 2:53pm
14th Nov 2023 4:03pm
