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Oh yeah! This is very good, my friend.

Thank you, that means a lot.
I found a mother load of my old writing.
Writing my ex husband had typeset for publication. I will be posting some of the better ones.

I really like this one also, Debbie. Can’t wait to see more of those earlier writings :)

Thank you! I'd love to share them.

Well done db…

Thank u 😊

Another superb offering describing a love connection here. It's great you have plenty of preserved material in the can. I feel your early work will be equally as interesting as your current stuff. It may be older but it's gonna feel fresh & new, especially when combined with new critique perspectives. This could also keep you going on DUP throughout any lean writing period, although I doubt you will ever dry up. 👍😊

I hope I can post both new and older work.
Thanks so much for your comments.

Ahhh. don't those early writes fill you with
a warm sense of fondness

Luv it!!

They do! Thank you for checking out.

Like a deep fire, burning with desire.  Such could be interpreted as carnality, but you use distinct characterization to delineate.  You describe your over-flowing emotions to be with another quite well.  There's a garnering of innocence, transposed and vicarious with and by another, rather than just covetous lust.  A yearning for a relationship, which only you know distinctly.  Overall, a creative way to capture such feelings.  Even if this is old, it alludes to certain potential.  Ha-ha.  Anyway, thanks for sharing!

Thank you for all the feedback. It was meant to be deeper than just lust. Your depictions of my writing are always spot on. ( I hate that term, lol) but it's the truth.
Very kind of you to take the time to comment.