Orange Twilight

WOW! Lol, fancy some carrot sticks at McDonald's instead of french fries tonight? That's the vibe I'm getting here, haha. I don't feel I am totally worthy of an orange-infused glorious sunset. ;-)

Hahaha
I don't even know how to respond to that.  
I hate McDonalds. If they made carrot fries, I'd prob like them, lol.  
You earned the dedication. 😊

Are u at the pub? If so, I'm jealous

I am not in the pub, don't worry & I just wanted to say I am not worthy of your poem. 😚

You made me smile on a very dark day, so yes you are

Sorry to crash the party but hey the poem is great!

Crash away, lol. Thank you very much. To me, that is what the sunset looked like tonight.
Have a great night.

Much meteorological glory to be seen tonight for sure!

Thanks for reading!

Dear D,

I really enjoyed your vivid image of the evenings sunset. There is such an awe and beauty and your write captures that wonderfully. H🌷

Thank you so much!

Very succinct poem.  The color and metaphors capture a unique aesthetic.  Almost as if hauntingly disposed.  Fleshly death, found in the enveloping horizon or fate of the universe, as it comes across to me, anyway, in relating to it.  You did a good job with orange, tangerine, carrot, torching, the words of color you used to describe, as well as the other words.  The direction and emotion were there.  Overall, nice brevity.  Very concise, and expressive!

Thanks so much for the feedback. That is exactly what the setting sun looked like. I'm glad you enjoyed. I enjoy your critique!!