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My Love
Goodbye my love
We'll meet again
When I am old and grey
Goodbye my love
We'll meet again
Once I have passed away
Hello my love
We meet again
I told you it would be
Hello my love
We meet again
Your face I've longed to see
Forever my love
I'd never forget
Our vows when we were wed
Forever my love
I'd never forget
The things that we both said
We'll meet again
When I am old and grey
Goodbye my love
We'll meet again
Once I have passed away
Hello my love
We meet again
I told you it would be
Hello my love
We meet again
Your face I've longed to see
Forever my love
I'd never forget
Our vows when we were wed
Forever my love
I'd never forget
The things that we both said
Published 5th Nov 2023
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6th Nov 2023 1:24am
6th Nov 2023 2:05am
6th Nov 2023 1:52am
Dear SW,
I enjoyed the style of this piece and how you begin each stanza. The evolution of the relationship is full of love and hope. Very lovely piece. H🌷
I enjoyed the style of this piece and how you begin each stanza. The evolution of the relationship is full of love and hope. Very lovely piece. H🌷
6th Nov 2023 2:10am
H,
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this one! It makes me happy when I can give some happiness to someone! I admit I became a bit emotional thinking of the day my husband and I will part when one of our lives is over. The waiting would be so hard for him if I went first. 💔
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this one! It makes me happy when I can give some happiness to someone! I admit I became a bit emotional thinking of the day my husband and I will part when one of our lives is over. The waiting would be so hard for him if I went first. 💔
