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Neon
Hello madness,
come speak to me quietly about nothing
there is an emptiness of thought I seek
Sewing starlight from neon
I look to the mundane
and draw a new truth
Where cult beliefs hold real value
as the obscure hides in the open
and a little shine can be seen from the heavens
Published 5th Nov 2023
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5th Nov 2023 12:42pm
5th Nov 2023 8:21pm
5th Nov 2023 1:03pm
I love this, it says so much with so few words!
Perhaps we all feel driven my our own unique madness.
And emptiness would be a welcome reprieve at times.
Can we consider sex, drugs, and other vices emptiness.
Or is that they displace the madness for a time.
Those neon lights are always calling...
The Mundane much easier than the Arcane.
A thin veil of skin hiding the obscure in the open.
But your madness will always be seen from the heavens.
And the angels who have fallen can attest to it's allure.
Perhaps we all feel driven my our own unique madness.
And emptiness would be a welcome reprieve at times.
Can we consider sex, drugs, and other vices emptiness.
Or is that they displace the madness for a time.
Those neon lights are always calling...
The Mundane much easier than the Arcane.
A thin veil of skin hiding the obscure in the open.
But your madness will always be seen from the heavens.
And the angels who have fallen can attest to it's allure.
5th Nov 2023 8:27pm
Hello beautiful Kristina I will think about your insightful comment for a bit and give you a better reply thank you lady 💕
Anonymous
5th Nov 2023 2:02pm
Sometimes when the noise in our heads gets too loud, we crave something to drown it out. This is a brilliant piece of expression
5th Nov 2023 8:25pm
thank you graciously dearest poet for the understanding here...while I don't go to strip bars I like to watch
sexy choreography...I just thought the art matched how I feel distracting myself from the internal madness that this world can cause with its very distressing factors 💕
I focus on the beautiful to drown out the ugliness...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3VB4dQuQ00
I see beauty even in the worst places we have no choice really...
sexy choreography...I just thought the art matched how I feel distracting myself from the internal madness that this world can cause with its very distressing factors 💕
I focus on the beautiful to drown out the ugliness...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3VB4dQuQ00
I see beauty even in the worst places we have no choice really...
9th Nov 2023 11:48pm
The opening line shows confidence event on the face of adversity right before we dive into the piece.
Well done
Well done
