Mourning Thoughts

The loss of loved ones leave empty acres in spaces that at one time had smiles.  

Yes they do. Thanks for reading.

Thank you so very much.

Nice one, Debbie. As long as you remember him he'll always be alive. That's what I believe when I think about my Mum.

Much love 💐

Thank you for your kind words.

How wonderful …

Thanks so much my friend.

This is a beautiful tribute indeed

Muh respect

Naaj

Thanks so very much

It is a nice thought that lost love ones could be reached in a 3rd dimension somehow. 🙏

It comforts me. Thank you for reading as always.

I love the depths of this it's very profoundly beautiful 💕

Thanks for being an inspiration and your kind words.

you are very gifted I miss my daddy too I can relate sometimes I can feel my dad over my shoulder watching me write...he was a writer too 💕

Again, you do a good job of capturing a creative perspective.  Wondering about truth and purpose can ultimately make one question what's uncertain, and I get some of that from here.  I'm sorry that you miss your father.  It can be lonely, empty, depressing, and feel like nothingness.  That's sort of how people deal with death, I guess.  Loved ones are thought of, and it leads to inquiring about where they go, or what happens to them, or will you see them again.  Those thoughts can lead to the unraveling mystery of life on earth and in the universe, and why.  The interjection of that simply hasn't happened yet - truth and purpose, that is.  With all of that said, your choice of metaphor creates an abounding affinity and yearning desire to express some of those feelings.  You represent conceptualization and ideas very well with how you choose to approach addressing this thing on your mind.  The emotional part, in general, is layered nicely in the transition of the theme and direction.  Some personal narrative is in there as well.  Has human qualities to it.  Overall, succinct, concise work here that comes from a deep impact or impression.  Mourning and grieving is a part of life, and it affects everyone at some point.  Anyway, thanks for sharing, and I hope to read more from you!

Thank you ever so much for that feedback. It makes me feel creatively organized, lol - when I'm really a mess. I appreciate everything you detail, as I don't really have formal knowledge of poetry. Everything you said is very true in me writing that piece.
Have a great night!