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Sub-Merge
I've always opened my ocean for you
for esoteric exploration
soothed your aches in my waters
while undercurrents get carried away in
waves of my devotion rolling over your structure
bent in limbo...stretching limbs
spread myself for your keen penetration
nothing held back
accepting focused progression
sweaty aggression
fully embracing my place in your universe
engraved within the enclave of us
grateful for what I'm given
taken in faith to our NetherRealm
and yet here we are
of course here we are
back at the point of origin...
orgasmic...organic
...the point of no return
and new beginnings
I ache...in so many ways...
seismic...chakric
I can't even express them
just spill them..unveiling truth as
my walls still retain the stain of your name
in deep tribal etchings
guarded eternal
thick...humid...ethereal
your essence the same...and changed
charged...electrified
more exposed to my sight...
vivid...another dimension added
more textured
tortured by a kindred past
this is you...also new
renewed...reimagined...revamped
the feel familiar & unknown
unhinged...binging on reserved fruit
like taking a new lover with the spirit of another
...or the other way around
it doesn't matter...
the lightning is still grounded
by the same rod
you've always churned turbulence in my waves
enlightening...heightening our sex...
burning within the psyche
didn't you know...I welcome you...
with submissive warmth...to feel you grow
.....grinding as you go forth and neath
...as deep as you need to go
giving haunted girth a space to feed
...to seed hallowed earth within
ravage me with your passion...
...scorch me with tenderness and
intelligence infused with raw intimacy
intimately our movement was
...always genuine
you've always been under my skin
I'd have it no other way
...as we submerge once again
in echoes of ecstasy
for esoteric exploration
soothed your aches in my waters
while undercurrents get carried away in
waves of my devotion rolling over your structure
bent in limbo...stretching limbs
spread myself for your keen penetration
nothing held back
accepting focused progression
sweaty aggression
fully embracing my place in your universe
engraved within the enclave of us
grateful for what I'm given
taken in faith to our NetherRealm
and yet here we are
of course here we are
back at the point of origin...
orgasmic...organic
...the point of no return
and new beginnings
I ache...in so many ways...
seismic...chakric
I can't even express them
just spill them..unveiling truth as
my walls still retain the stain of your name
in deep tribal etchings
guarded eternal
thick...humid...ethereal
your essence the same...and changed
charged...electrified
more exposed to my sight...
vivid...another dimension added
more textured
tortured by a kindred past
this is you...also new
renewed...reimagined...revamped
the feel familiar & unknown
unhinged...binging on reserved fruit
like taking a new lover with the spirit of another
...or the other way around
it doesn't matter...
the lightning is still grounded
by the same rod
you've always churned turbulence in my waves
enlightening...heightening our sex...
burning within the psyche
didn't you know...I welcome you...
with submissive warmth...to feel you grow
.....grinding as you go forth and neath
...as deep as you need to go
giving haunted girth a space to feed
...to seed hallowed earth within
ravage me with your passion...
...scorch me with tenderness and
intelligence infused with raw intimacy
intimately our movement was
...always genuine
you've always been under my skin
I'd have it no other way
...as we submerge once again
in echoes of ecstasy
Published 28th Oct 2023
| Edited 29th Oct 2023
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Thank you so much for your sentiments and the RL, Her.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this read.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this read.
28th Oct 2023 11:34pm
Deliciously written, Confluence. A beautiful tribute to the intimacy between the moon and the element of water.
29th Oct 2023 3:37am
29th Oct 2023 2:38am
Wow!! Kind of speechless. It kept getting more intense the more I read.
The pacing is spot on:)
The pacing is spot on:)
29th Oct 2023 3:41am
It definitely was a unique feeling that moved these words
Thank you for coming along for the ride Adelphina
Your thoughts are deeply appreciated
Thank you for coming along for the ride Adelphina
Your thoughts are deeply appreciated
29th Oct 2023 4:32am
Dear C,
Lovely expression of nature and the beauty of its design. Your poem was an adventure for me that was exciting as it was relaxing. Wonderful write. H🌷
Lovely expression of nature and the beauty of its design. Your poem was an adventure for me that was exciting as it was relaxing. Wonderful write. H🌷
29th Oct 2023 11:13am
Thank you Honoria for such a wonderful
comment. Your words brought a smile to my face.
comment. Your words brought a smile to my face.
29th Oct 2023 11:14am
