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Then and Now
'Neath horizon
Turning still
Belted distance
Whence gravity
Casting time
As matters align
Forming planes
Energy exchange
Before the sun
Crescent bestowing
Of the night
Polar invert
Relative posing
The atmospheric
Where resolute
Below here
While the moon
Eons ago
Befallen traverses
Rising upon
Once image
Day beckoning
As near away
Existing sight
What light drew
Amazing amassing
Spinning softly
Waves translucent
Altogether capturing
Lucid orbiting
From position
Then and now
Turning still
Belted distance
Whence gravity
Casting time
As matters align
Forming planes
Energy exchange
Before the sun
Crescent bestowing
Of the night
Polar invert
Relative posing
The atmospheric
Where resolute
Below here
While the moon
Eons ago
Befallen traverses
Rising upon
Once image
Day beckoning
As near away
Existing sight
What light drew
Amazing amassing
Spinning softly
Waves translucent
Altogether capturing
Lucid orbiting
From position
Then and now
Published 15th Oct 2023
Author's Note
The sun was rising as I wrote this, ironically. Various positions of observation.
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15th Oct 2023 2:34pm
That was truly exquisite. I love your depiction of the sun and moon. The language was softer, it read beautifully.
15th Oct 2023 2:57pm
Thanks for your critique and checking it out in general. It's always a pleasure to hear from you.
