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Another War
Another war,
It's been heard before.
Another war,
What's this one for?
Another war,
Hundreds dead, if not more.
Another war,
Weapons causing uproar.
Another war,
Shaking societies to the core.
Another war,
More commotion, more furore.
Another war?
Cease fire and be enemies no more.
It's been heard before.
Another war,
What's this one for?
Another war,
Hundreds dead, if not more.
Another war,
Weapons causing uproar.
Another war,
Shaking societies to the core.
Another war,
More commotion, more furore.
Another war?
Cease fire and be enemies no more.
Written by
Too_hot69
(BelindaSnow)
Published 11th Oct 2023
| Edited 7th Oct 2024
Author's Note
I'm reposting this on the anniversary of the war that inspired me to write it.
It's gone on so much longer than expected and it seems to be growing.
This is not the only war going on, of course.
My prayers are with everyone, everywhere, affected by conflict.
It's gone on so much longer than expected and it seems to be growing.
This is not the only war going on, of course.
My prayers are with everyone, everywhere, affected by conflict.
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Re. Another War
11th Oct 2023 2:17pm
It's difficult to be sympathetic toward a part of the world that so rarely demonstrates any sympathy to their neighbors.
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Re: Re. Another War
11th Oct 2023 2:31pm
I get that, but directly or indirectly it affects us all. There must be another way to move forward.
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11th Oct 2023 2:48pm
Re. Another War
11th Oct 2023 4:12pm
If only…
We share one planet. You would think we would find a way to work together, but it has never been this way.
We share one planet. You would think we would find a way to work together, but it has never been this way.
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Re: Re. Another War
11th Oct 2023 4:51pm
Hopefully that doesn't mean it'll always be this way. But, yes, this is an age old problem that doesn't seem to go away.
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11th Oct 2023 6:25pm
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11th Oct 2023 7:23pm
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11th Oct 2023 7:30pm
Re. Another War
11th Oct 2023 8:54pm
Wow, thank you both @Mr. Karswell and @Solomon_Song. I can't write music, nor can I sing but I'll see if I can come up with a tune.
@Oral, sorry for reminding you. I work with refugees from war-torn countries, the affects are lasting.
@Oral, sorry for reminding you. I work with refugees from war-torn countries, the affects are lasting.
Re. Another War
11th Oct 2023 9:08pm
This situation is upsetting me too. Thanks for putting this message out there today.
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11th Oct 2023 9:39pm
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11th Oct 2023 9:45pm
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11th Oct 2023 9:59pm
I'm sorry. I think there are helplines where you can reach out and speak to someone. The BBC usually have some helpful websites at the end of recent news programmes.
When I heard people in London were celebrating the attacks in the streets at the weekend, that was upsetting to me.
When I heard people in London were celebrating the attacks in the streets at the weekend, that was upsetting to me.
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11th Oct 2023 10:02pm
Re. Another War
12th Oct 2023 5:52pm
It's always frustrating to hear about another war and all the lives lost. Your poem says it all perfectly.
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12th Oct 2023 6:00pm
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22nd Oct 2023 4:46pm
Re. Another War
9th Apr 2024 11:52pm
Israel has lost me. Life-long supporter and will always support her right to live, but they've had most of my life to come up with a two-state solution and they are not even trying to make that happen. Enough already. No more holocausts. I am with Gaza on this one. It would be like the ones of us who did not vote for the red-hatters to be punished for their mutitudinously egregious sins.
Nuff!
Nuff!
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We've already started seeing refugees from Palestine here in the UK.
My biggest fear is that this war is creating another generation of bitter, angry victims who will want revenge at any cost. Perfectly understandable but also perfectly avoidable with a two state solution. And the cycle of hatred goes on...
My biggest fear is that this war is creating another generation of bitter, angry victims who will want revenge at any cost. Perfectly understandable but also perfectly avoidable with a two state solution. And the cycle of hatred goes on...
Re. Another War
12th Apr 2024 5:57am
Another reason for people who cannot undiscover gods of any stripe.
Sad state of affairs when religions claim they can't talk to the "other" side.
Richard
Sad state of affairs when religions claim they can't talk to the "other" side.
Richard
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Re: Re. Another War
12th Apr 2024 10:58am
There are so many hypocrites out there. It often goes hand in hand with having these deep beliefs.
Regarding the "other" side, it isn't always the case. Sometimes it's one religion but different denominations. This has been going on for centuries.
Aren't we supposed to learn from past mistakes? Evolve to unite rather than what's happening in so many parts the world?
Regarding the "other" side, it isn't always the case. Sometimes it's one religion but different denominations. This has been going on for centuries.
Aren't we supposed to learn from past mistakes? Evolve to unite rather than what's happening in so many parts the world?
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12th Apr 2024 10:07pm
Your reply is too true Snowbelle. That religions cannot see the sense of looking back and reviewing past mistakes is what convinced me of the truth in there being no such thing as god.
R
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Re. Another War
29th Apr 2024 11:25pm
If only. Wars have been going on since ancient times. And how many innocent people were caught in their wake.
The repetition almost seems annoying, but aren't wars. Therefore the constant repetition fits because it reflects the constant diet of wars wars wars.
Nicely done.
The repetition almost seems annoying, but aren't wars. Therefore the constant repetition fits because it reflects the constant diet of wars wars wars.
Nicely done.
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Re: Re. Another War
30th Apr 2024 00:58am
Wow, thank you for picking up something in the poem that no one else has.
I'm surprised this war is still going on and has triggered yet another conflict but this is the world we live in.
Peace
I'm surprised this war is still going on and has triggered yet another conflict but this is the world we live in.
Peace