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3 p.m. storms
The glass is cool and clear
against my forehead
fat listless raindrops
echo the empty
thunder in me
I watch the
storm with
held breath
and wet shoulders
against my forehead
fat listless raindrops
echo the empty
thunder in me
I watch the
storm with
held breath
and wet shoulders
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Re. 3 p.m. storms
7th Oct 2023 9:50pm
Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 00:16am
To me night storms are kind of glamorous:)
Something about the lightning flashing
followed by the thunder.
Thanks for sharing this!
Something about the lightning flashing
followed by the thunder.
Thanks for sharing this!
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Re: Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 7:16pm
Mmm. I love the way Central Florida tries to flood the world every afternoon.
But there are those days where the rain feels morose. As if regret were palpable.
But there are those days where the rain feels morose. As if regret were palpable.
Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 00:32am
The storm threatened inside my walls
it flashed lightening, a tempest brew
tears formed, flood warning
I cry, an outpouring of feeling
forlorn in the pain
I keen alone
washed away by pain
you reached out for me when I drown
picked me from the deluge
and kissed my soul
love you lady ❤️
it flashed lightening, a tempest brew
tears formed, flood warning
I cry, an outpouring of feeling
forlorn in the pain
I keen alone
washed away by pain
you reached out for me when I drown
picked me from the deluge
and kissed my soul
love you lady ❤️
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Re: Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 7:17pm
Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 4:05am
Thought provoking...
Been watching recent storms...
(Actually...
I watched one come in from the shore,
then sat under a bridge,
sheltering from the storm...
Strangely enough,
such a thing is a place I project myself...
In certain meditations...)
[On a side note...
I did observe we were having a drought...
Seemed we got
at least lower than average rain amounts
the rest of the time after...
In any event...
Have been watching storms...
Captured cool...
Been watching recent storms...
(Actually...
I watched one come in from the shore,
then sat under a bridge,
sheltering from the storm...
Strangely enough,
such a thing is a place I project myself...
In certain meditations...)
[On a side note...
I did observe we were having a drought...
Seemed we got
at least lower than average rain amounts
the rest of the time after...
In any event...
Have been watching storms...
Captured cool...
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Re: Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 7:18pm
The recent storms have felt like a reflection of my inner self lately. It's been weird.
I like weird.
Thanks for your cool observations Cipher.
I like weird.
Thanks for your cool observations Cipher.
Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 8:41am
Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 10:21am
I like these calm little moments before the storm
It reminds me of beethoven
It reminds me of beethoven
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Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 12:09pm
The second stanza really spoke to me. Feeling the pain that love sometimes evokes.
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Re: Re. 3 p.m. storms
8th Oct 2023 7:19pm
Fuck yes. The way it storms on one pane of the glass, and remains calm on the other is a reflection of that hurricane of fucking pain.
Thank you for you
Thank you for you
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15th Oct 2023 12:41pm
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Re: Re. 3 p.m. storms
18th Oct 2023 3:24am
Fuck, Ethan, you're a breath of fresh fucking nitrogen.
Thank you. I feel seen and it's glorious. Thank you
Thank you. I feel seen and it's glorious. Thank you
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd May 2024 11:45am
26th Oct 2023 12:33pm
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