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dare
So full of a feeling
I'm breaking inside
my love breathes
with sweet sighs and moans
Exhale I love him,
breathe in it hurts
savage faith in the moment
it tells me honesties
you're so beautiful to me
Crass assassin, so polished
perfection in a suit
my lusty dream in blue jeans
I crave your stare
a weaker man wouldn't
a man of your cut dares
Published 7th Oct 2023
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7th Oct 2023 4:24am
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7th Oct 2023 10:29am
Exhale I love him, breathe in it hurts.
Wow have I been there. You are so in tune to the emotions of the heart. ❤️
Wow have I been there. You are so in tune to the emotions of the heart. ❤️
7th Oct 2023 12:51pm
I love this poem and this line:my lusty dream in blue jeans..such a talented write dear Crimsin.<3
Anonymous
7th Oct 2023 4:38pm
Damn Brenda
This vibe was is very unique in
sultry overtones...like you wrote this in mascara
Sexy and hot!!
This vibe was is very unique in
sultry overtones...like you wrote this in mascara
Sexy and hot!!
8th Oct 2023 1:08am
I love a good dare!
So many great lines in this but I love the
savage faith!!
So many great lines in this but I love the
savage faith!!
9th Oct 2023 3:47am
28th Oct 2023 1:22am
"Exhale I love him,
breathe in it hurts" liked the powerful feeling in this.
Great stuff crimsin.
breathe in it hurts" liked the powerful feeling in this.
Great stuff crimsin.
