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Spider Thoughts
Head full of spiders
Waiting for each floating thought
To get caught
Wrapping them in cobwebs of you
Silken sullen headache
Need an exterminator
Waiting for each floating thought
To get caught
Wrapping them in cobwebs of you
Silken sullen headache
Need an exterminator
Published 3rd Oct 2023
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3rd Oct 2023 6:57pm
this is very surreal this poem of yours to me
one because of the subject matter
I had dream last night where I was tangled in a spider web...
great write...
one because of the subject matter
I had dream last night where I was tangled in a spider web...
great write...
3rd Oct 2023 7:22pm
That's kinda cool! Not being captured by a spider but that it happened the same I wrote this.
3rd Oct 2023 8:23pm
it is cool and surreal for me because that was really an odd and standout dream for me...
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28th Oct 2023 00:51am
Liked the multiple metaphors this entails, with a wide range of emotions too.
Nicely penned.
Nicely penned.
28th Oct 2023 3:39am
