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Vampire Morning
The sun bled such golden bronze final light.
On what would be my last human night.
A fleeting warmth for those thoughts that fear
the moment when darkness descends.
Existential fright.
In my soul, lonely to the core of my every last bone.
My hardened heart, a heavy stone.
I wait alone.
He had no shadow.
He was the shadow.
The hunter of my dripping need.
Hungered with a centuries old greed.
And it consumed me with dark delight.
My rich blue veins with their agonizing ache
for his immortal bite.
On what would be my last human night.
A fleeting warmth for those thoughts that fear
the moment when darkness descends.
Existential fright.
In my soul, lonely to the core of my every last bone.
My hardened heart, a heavy stone.
I wait alone.
He had no shadow.
He was the shadow.
The hunter of my dripping need.
Hungered with a centuries old greed.
And it consumed me with dark delight.
My rich blue veins with their agonizing ache
for his immortal bite.
Author's Note
I woke up a vampire this morning, lol 🦇
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Re. Vampire Morning
Darkness holds a profound allure, evoking both fear and fascination. It's in the depths of this obsidian realm that vampires come alive, embodying a blend of eternal mystery and forbidden desire. Through their existence, they unearth deep emotions buried within us, casting a hypnotic spell that captures our imagination and pushes the boundaries of our own understanding.
Amazing
Amazing
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3rd Oct 2023 11:24am
Thank you! I have a dark erotic fascination with being bitten by a vampire. Lol
I love what you wrote in your comment. 🦇
I love what you wrote in your comment. 🦇
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3rd Oct 2023 12:01pm
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3rd Oct 2023 12:01pm
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3rd Oct 2023 8:17pm
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3rd Oct 2023 8:36pm
Are you a vampire, lol , very kidding.
What type of blood disorder is a phlebotomist needed for?
Oh and thanks for reading!
What type of blood disorder is a phlebotomist needed for?
Oh and thanks for reading!
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3rd Oct 2023 8:44pm
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2023 7:06pm
'' He had no shadow.
He was the shadow.''
an invitation like none other
sexy write indeed!!
He was the shadow.''
an invitation like none other
sexy write indeed!!
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4th Oct 2023 7:22pm
Re. Vampire Morning
5th Oct 2023 8:57am
This is expressive and metaphoric, in what you attempt to convey and capture. I feel like the overall theme is thoroughly elaborated in a unique style only you could write. it reminds me of how I know autumn moves you. Perhaps you could write a poem of a sunset? I'd be interested in your emotional disposition as to such, in how you define and relate. It's great that you're so motivated and inspired by the change of the seasons. Thanks for sharing!
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5th Oct 2023 9:20am
I loved your response. Autumn is my favorite, but I find beauty in every season. A sunset! I'd love to write about that - it would be a description of the sunset in comparison to the sunset of our lives.
You have always greatly encouraged me & I truly appreciate that.
Maybe you will like my poems on skeletal winter trees, a fav topic, lol
You have always greatly encouraged me & I truly appreciate that.
Maybe you will like my poems on skeletal winter trees, a fav topic, lol
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5th Oct 2023 9:33am
Ha-ha, definitely! I'd love to check out any insight of creative imagination you'd have to offer. Not to make you too big in the scheme of things, as that makes for downfall, but you have a peculiar, particular, and precise flow and function in your emotional relativity that I find inspiring. The way you capture dualities of metaphor and feelings, as well as observation and definition, there's definitely something active there. Keep writing!! I'd love to read!
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5th Oct 2023 10:09am
Thank you ever so much.
And I think you are pretty in tune with emotion too, you're latest post was great.
And I think you are pretty in tune with emotion too, you're latest post was great.