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Lonely
It's a sharp one sided echo
The absence of being known
Hyper awareness of a heartbeat
That's only your own hiding behind ribs
The absence of being known
Hyper awareness of a heartbeat
That's only your own hiding behind ribs
Published 28th Sep 2023
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28th Sep 2023 5:50am
Dear B,
You’ve captured the intensity of loneliness. The sound of the heartbeat is a brilliant analogy and hits very close to home for me. Wonderful writing. H🌷
You’ve captured the intensity of loneliness. The sound of the heartbeat is a brilliant analogy and hits very close to home for me. Wonderful writing. H🌷
3rd Oct 2023 6:22pm
28th Sep 2023 6:40am
hello beautiful BeastGirl or Beasty I am lonely too I wish sometimes another could share my heart to understand it's depth of pain... you've captured the essence here so brilliantly 💕
3rd Oct 2023 6:22pm
28th Sep 2023 10:49am
3rd Oct 2023 6:23pm
28th Sep 2023 7:48pm
I’ve read this several times. Each time with one eye closed, almost like I didn’t want to because it’s so damn relatable. This IS perfectly penned.
3rd Oct 2023 6:23pm
24th Oct 2023 10:48pm
We become more aware of all things internally in that silent echo.
Strong spill dear Blue.
Strong spill dear Blue.
