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incredible rain:  a pentaprismic suite

of floods and famines, flaws and fools  
 
1. overture  
 
incredible rain  
                    stampeding tears from weeping, trembling clouds,  
                    whose utterance the evensong enshrouds.  
inedible grain  
                    gleaned from wild seeds of poison ivy fields―  
                    abundant nullity with swords and shields.  
indelible stain  
                    marks well the parchment of the careless ink  
                    that leaks where mental compass strains to think.  
insatiable gain  
                    chokes up the gullet of the heedless fool  
                    who for stark lack of wisdom can but drool.  
 
© Copyright 2023 September 18  
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Written by cabcool
Published | Edited 24th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Pentaprism: a prism that has five faces, a pair of which are at 90° to each other
Suite: a number of things forming a series or set
This pentaprismic suite comprises 5 shorter poems proliferating around the main theme. It has an opening overture (prelude) and four concordant episodes. Ultimately, it is a single poem in five episodes. This is the overture.
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