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What I Said To The Redhead Chick
"I'm going home" was what
I said to the redhead chick
who was still sitting naked
on the floor and watching
me get dressed and ready
to leave her apartment.
I said to the redhead chick
who was still sitting naked
on the floor and watching
me get dressed and ready
to leave her apartment.
Published 19th Sep 2023
Author's Note
The author of this free verse poem talks about what he has done after spending some time in a woman's home.
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19th Sep 2023 2:40pm
19th Sep 2023 2:45pm
Rhyming comment (I agree, she looks sad as if he was cutting short a promising session)
Would you walk away from a woman like this,
who'd stripped off for you, expecting a kiss?
Was he put off by the glasses or red hair,
or the tattoos highllit on her body bare?
Would you walk away from a woman like this,
who'd stripped off for you, expecting a kiss?
Was he put off by the glasses or red hair,
or the tattoos highllit on her body bare?
20th Sep 2023 1:28am
Actually, this poem is a fictional one... but thanks for the comment, anyway.
20th Sep 2023 6:33am
I have a flexible taste in beauty and respect bespectacled women (sign of learnedness to me). Specs, red hair and tats would not put me off in the bedroom.
20th Sep 2023 12:22pm
