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Fucking Shane
Fucking Shane
was like snorkeling
in the warm living waters of
North Padre Island
surprised to find yourself
in the embrace of another
from the same species.
I remember
the muffled sounds
in my ocean head
as two bodies trampled
against each other
mindlessly trying to
hold what was just
beyond our reach.
was like snorkeling
in the warm living waters of
North Padre Island
surprised to find yourself
in the embrace of another
from the same species.
I remember
the muffled sounds
in my ocean head
as two bodies trampled
against each other
mindlessly trying to
hold what was just
beyond our reach.
Published 19th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Remembering with regret and some gratitude. Photo was edited from one mother took on one of our beach trips.
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20th Sep 2023 1:31am
Heady mix of metaphors of sex and swimming - sexy combination. Would make one think you had good times in the sea (or at any events 'a sea' of something) together.
20th Sep 2023 10:56pm
Nice metaphor. Fucking can be like swimming under water...gliding weightless through it...immerced in it. Leaving it can feel as though you've been refreshed. But knowing you may not go back to it can be sad...if not regretful.
22nd Sep 2023 2:57pm
