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Still Here
Can you feel my pulse quickening?
As you take my hand in yours
Your eyes and lips make distinct promises
Both end up leaving me torn.
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I feel nauseous just thinking of us
Of what we used to be, the broken dreams
You broke every promise you ever made
I’m trying to stitch myself back together seam by seam.
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Can you hear it? Can you hear my heart crying?
Begging for relief as it lies there bleeding
“I’m still here! Why are you killing me?”
“My heart is dead; you’re nothing but a dream.”
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Your eyes, once expressive, are now empty
Who’s the one still alive?
I can’t tell, all I feel is cold
I’ve finally felt my last sunrise.
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Can you hear it? Can you hear my heart crying?
Begging for relief as it lies there bleeding
“I’m still here! Why are you killing me?”
“My heart is dead; you’re nothing but a dream.”
As you take my hand in yours
Your eyes and lips make distinct promises
Both end up leaving me torn.
-
I feel nauseous just thinking of us
Of what we used to be, the broken dreams
You broke every promise you ever made
I’m trying to stitch myself back together seam by seam.
-
Can you hear it? Can you hear my heart crying?
Begging for relief as it lies there bleeding
“I’m still here! Why are you killing me?”
“My heart is dead; you’re nothing but a dream.”
-
Your eyes, once expressive, are now empty
Who’s the one still alive?
I can’t tell, all I feel is cold
I’ve finally felt my last sunrise.
-
Can you hear it? Can you hear my heart crying?
Begging for relief as it lies there bleeding
“I’m still here! Why are you killing me?”
“My heart is dead; you’re nothing but a dream.”
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Re. Still Here
16th Sep 2023 2:46am
The flow is cool but you're really good with the pain Lady. This may be the first piece of this type we're read from you and it's totally cool. Tight piece Lady
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Re. Still Here
16th Sep 2023 4:29am
Powerful writing. I know the feeling of nausea that is not caused by sickness or something undercooked.
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17th Sep 2023 00:38am
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Re. Still Here
16th Sep 2023 8:54pm
Devastatingly painful, how did you enter my dream?
Always be still here!
Let no "lyer" bed you...
JJ
Always be still here!
Let no "lyer" bed you...
JJ
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17th Sep 2023 00:39am
Thank you for your comment and for adding my work to your RL, Poetryman. Dreams are portals into the unseen and the surreal.
Re. Still Here
17th Sep 2023 2:01am
In your confession you show an amazing power to move ahead.. Hugs and peace, Oral
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17th Sep 2023 2:02am
Re. Still Here
17th Sep 2023 2:19am
A poem that really resonates for anyone who has been there, enjoyed the read.
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17th Sep 2023 2:22am
Re. Still Here
2nd Oct 2023 3:12am
Great writing. I can hear the melody
in each stanza. Doesn't read forced. Flowed really smooth:)
in each stanza. Doesn't read forced. Flowed really smooth:)
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2nd Oct 2023 3:20am
Re. Still Here
14th Oct 2023 7:47pm
A finely-crafted poem that deeply connects with anyone who's experienced such emotions. Fantastic work! :)
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14th Oct 2023 11:41pm