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graceful agony..
Your aura
that attracts me,
your radiant face
which makes me
want to see you again n again,
your smile
that fills my emptiness,
silver strings shining
on your beard,
that makes me
sing a song,
your talk
that gives me hope,
your cocoon connection with me
that gives me warmth,
n aaaaahhhh!!!
remembrance of this beautiful journey
from morning to evening at night…
which mesmerizes me
with your fragrance in whole night
n neglecting......
it feels like I am in a battlefield
I am weaponless
I am helpless
n thorns are pricking my body
and I am scattered
on the ground sobbing n crying in pain...
that attracts me,
your radiant face
which makes me
want to see you again n again,
your smile
that fills my emptiness,
silver strings shining
on your beard,
that makes me
sing a song,
your talk
that gives me hope,
your cocoon connection with me
that gives me warmth,
n aaaaahhhh!!!
remembrance of this beautiful journey
from morning to evening at night…
which mesmerizes me
with your fragrance in whole night
n neglecting......
it feels like I am in a battlefield
I am weaponless
I am helpless
n thorns are pricking my body
and I am scattered
on the ground sobbing n crying in pain...
Published 14th Sep 2023
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14th Sep 2023 5:28pm
Heyya
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement! N will do my best to find happiness 😊
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement! N will do my best to find happiness 😊
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Yes Robert
Will continue to strive to create meaningful and evocative poetry that resonate with readers. N Thank you for your warm support!!
Will continue to strive to create meaningful and evocative poetry that resonate with readers. N Thank you for your warm support!!
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16th Sep 2023 7:52pm
A wonderful build up, until the last stanzas steer it towards being an unrequited love?
The agony of one sided feelings, yes?
I'm sure most all have experienced such a dilemma in their past. You've brought it out in a fresh and personal light for all to embrace.
Well written, Dimpy.
The agony of one sided feelings, yes?
I'm sure most all have experienced such a dilemma in their past. You've brought it out in a fresh and personal light for all to embrace.
Well written, Dimpy.
17th Sep 2023 2:10am
Yes, this experience must have happened to many and whoever came out of it was saved n happy. and the one who immersed him/herself deeply in it got himself lost.. Well I am very grateful to you..
