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PLEASE, TAKE IT ALL
Once is not
enough;
twice will never
do and thrice
is just getting
started. I was
lost in a craving mood.
I was beyond
words and
desire for more;
it was all mine.
The taste, aroma,
the satisfaction of
eating a whole
cherry pie.
It was anything but
the pits.
Meet me at the Kissing
Place and we'll eat
pie together.
OKAY?
enough;
twice will never
do and thrice
is just getting
started. I was
lost in a craving mood.
I was beyond
words and
desire for more;
it was all mine.
The taste, aroma,
the satisfaction of
eating a whole
cherry pie.
It was anything but
the pits.
Meet me at the Kissing
Place and we'll eat
pie together.
OKAY?
Published 3rd Sep 2023
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3rd Sep 2023 9:38pm
3rd Sep 2023 9:40pm
Yes, the pits are shamed by the sweetness of the ripe peaches...oh, to eat and eat. Hugs and peace, Oral
8th Sep 2023 3:43pm
Food has all the compliments of the senses and the sensual. Nice write. ox LB
8th Sep 2023 4:53pm
