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When
my
time was
surrounded
by dark clouds,
they tortured
the paper,
now
my
words
got each
other's warmth
in the
beneath
of
sun-
shine
n they
sparkled on
paper
in
the
form
of
emotions...
my
time was
surrounded
by dark clouds,
they tortured
the paper,
now
my
words
got each
other's warmth
in the
beneath
of
sun-
shine
n they
sparkled on
paper
in
the
form
of
emotions...
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31st Aug 2023 7:55am
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31st Aug 2023 12:39pm
Different style than I’m used to reading. I like this. The way it’s written is beautiful.
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31st Aug 2023 4:16pm
Favourite line “they sparkled on paper in the form of emotions “. Lovely write. Having short lines also gives the layout of the poem a very pleasant shape.
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31st Aug 2023 5:25pm
Ooouu
Well thanks for coming after a long.. Appreciate your presence!! Hav a great time ahead
Well thanks for coming after a long.. Appreciate your presence!! Hav a great time ahead
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3rd Sep 2023 8:58am
Awesome writing as always but then again, it is YOU :) Sorry been away, been ill. Doing better now though. Always enjoy reading your words. You are mega-talented. Hope you are doing well also (HUGS)
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3rd Sep 2023 12:51pm
Ohhhhh.. one day I thought about that you haven't seen for many days..but I thought you will be busy... Well glad to hear that you are fine now.. 🤗
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5th Sep 2023 1:01pm
Sparkle on! Dimps.
Your words are so bright I have to wear shades 😎
Rock 'n' roll! 👍😎👍
Your words are so bright I have to wear shades 😎
Rock 'n' roll! 👍😎👍
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