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He brought roses
He brought juices
He brought chocolates
He brought candles
He brought perfume
He brought purse
He brought dresses
He took her to movies
took her to hotels
he did everything
to get her in the right mood
He loved her a lot..
but the query came
when she made
all these things ''secondary.."
Do humans do all this without feelings?
Was she bored?
Couldn't she tolerate some of his drawback
in return for so much love?
Does love break so easily?
Did she really like him?
Published 28th Aug 2023
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28th Aug 2023 10:40am
Of course. Materialism will always be secondary & ultimately unfulfilling when compared to love. Love's fake imitation will always unmask itself in the end. 😊
28th Aug 2023 1:08pm
28th Aug 2023 12:11pm
Materialism is a facade. All we want is human connection and love, even if we deny it.
Excellent poem, dimpy.
Excellent poem, dimpy.
28th Aug 2023 1:07pm
Yup it is true marry .. But sometimes materialistic things are also desired...n along with the warmth of true love, this is also needed for some girls.. N I'm also one of them.. Well thank you❤
28th Aug 2023 12:29pm
28th Aug 2023 1:08pm
28th Aug 2023 3:28pm
Material gifts a plus, but if love is not there it means zero. Of course Romance is always a big plus. Regards, Robert.
28th Aug 2023 3:34pm
merely love is not enough.. by my approach gifts, love and romance all three are necessary. n Change is also needed so that love doesn't get boring... Well thank you Robert 🤝
29th Aug 2023 2:53am
Material things aren't the answer, Live is answer and making sure she feels safe and loved. Keep on writing.
29th Aug 2023 3:11am
30th Aug 2023 4:21pm
material things only underline Love
for they will indeed be romantic gifts chosen by the heart
not the brain
for they will indeed be romantic gifts chosen by the heart
not the brain
30th Aug 2023 4:41pm
gift that attracts the eyes, also attracts the brain and heart. well According to me both material things and true love are necessary..thank you for reading!
31st Aug 2023 7:57am
31st Aug 2023 8:03am
3rd Sep 2023 9:07am
Really makes ya wonder sometimes. It's sad that materialistic things seem to take precedence over what truly matters in the heart and soul so often. Great writing as always my friend :)
3rd Sep 2023 12:46pm
