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Siblings on the bus, a lively scene
With laughter, chatter and joyful beam.
Together as travel, side by side,
Miles apart, yet heart to heart tied.
As we look out through the window,
The world passes us by like a show,
The bustling streets, the people and cars.
Melodies of life float in like stars.
With laughter, chatter and joyful beam.
Together as travel, side by side,
Miles apart, yet heart to heart tied.
As we look out through the window,
The world passes us by like a show,
The bustling streets, the people and cars.
Melodies of life float in like stars.
Published 26th Aug 2023
Author's Note
Having once lived more than 300 miles from family, just before the COVID pandemic, family came to be in the same city. We are now in the same city, yet still far apart and rely on the bus network to get to any one of our respective homes. This is about me and my siblings travelling around our city on the aforementioned bus network.
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- Edited 26th Aug 2023 10:44am
26th Aug 2023 10:43am
I like the spirit of poetry you infused your transportation situation with. Feeling the closeness of family through that shared experience of travel, definitely shines through in your piece. What an interesting and unique way to begin your poetic journey with us.
Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻
I look forward to reading more in your days ahead.
Again, welcome!
🌹B
Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻
I look forward to reading more in your days ahead.
Again, welcome!
🌹B
26th Aug 2023 1:22pm
26th Aug 2023 11:59am
I live in a large city and depend on mass transit. The single seat on our busses are most coveted .....
