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Leaky Time
tick tock
time
lifeblood
day bleeding
into day
night oozing
into night
tick tock
slow
venous leakage
or
arterial flood
one
never knows
tick tock
precious life
leaking away
lifeblood
time
tick tock
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
time
lifeblood
day bleeding
into day
night oozing
into night
tick tock
slow
venous leakage
or
arterial flood
one
never knows
tick tock
precious life
leaking away
lifeblood
time
tick tock
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
Published 19th Aug 2023
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19th Aug 2023 5:42pm
Almost sounds like someone is committing suicide, opening a vein while in the bath. Hey: time will get us wither way
19th Aug 2023 6:12pm
I definitely wasn’t thinking suicide, but I see how it could be interpreted that way.
21st Aug 2023 1:06pm
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