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weary bones & dragging feet
how heavy can it be
when it's hollow
but the pull does wear
flesh stretched
almost past bearing
lessons thus earned
come long in the learning
adhering to memory
for all eternity
nothing drags so hard
as feeling empty
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Published 17th Aug 2023
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17th Aug 2023 4:52pm
This hits so hard, that the impact is something that I know I'll feel long after reading, it truly reverberates .... especially those last two lines of sheer poetic brawn.
Your pen inks so profoundly the struggles that I believe many can identify with.
I hear you.
Thank you for sharing this brave spill.
🌹B
Your pen inks so profoundly the struggles that I believe many can identify with.
I hear you.
Thank you for sharing this brave spill.
🌹B
18th Aug 2023 1:02am
Thank you for the support on this poem. Working through some demons. Appreciate being heard
18th Aug 2023 1:04am
hello beautiful Willow oh god I feel this deeply
I can only hope whatever is making you feel like this gets better
it's beautiful written with a powerful impact 💕
I can only hope whatever is making you feel like this gets better
it's beautiful written with a powerful impact 💕
18th Aug 2023 1:10am
Working through the demons, ya know how that goes. They had free reign in my head for too long. Time they paid the rent up there. Thank you for the love on this, Brenda
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