Truth

hello dearest poet this left me melancholy indeed 💕

hopefully the feeling dissaptes

Dear AP,

To me there is nothing worse than unrequited love. It renders its victims so powerless until somehow they come around. That desolate feeling was so well captured in this poem. H🌷

its a place im used to
a familiar friend

This hits like a fucking speeding train....


Just, wow.
Daaaayum.
-💙

sometimes
i get impact right

this was gonna be longer

the length is perfect 👌🏻....
as is.

Total bullseye.

The painful truth
Love and light
Ron

yes it is Ron

Awesome write... its ache echoes...

a true ache always echoes

The pacing of this is poignant, I definitely felt the sentiment.

i like the impact of a short poem

Excellent writing!

thank you

i yry my best

Short and sweet

sometimes its all thats needed

Apathetic existence? You made me feel compelled , drawn closer to you even though you rejected!  Smooth atonement, why I feel opposite, I don't know, I love it!

Story of my life…
Such a palpable yearning.

my common thread

nice

thanks