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in the end
bated breath and sink into the mire
it is with great regret I admit
I don't think you feel me anymore
my love reaches for you
and I no longer feel you there
it aches with such a dull pain
my soul desires and seeks
with passion I covet your verse
I look and don't see
you've veiled your privacy
your secrets are locked
I panic inside my heart's chambers
you've gone missing
I no longer hold your fascination
still I will never regret
you held my immortality in your grasp
my saving grace breaking the mortal chain
from something ordinary
to a dalliance of the extraordinary
your mischievous smile ever captivating me
your eyes sparked danger
and I am forever swept away
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Re. in the end
14th Aug 2023 6:18pm
Re: Re. in the end
15th Aug 2023 00:56am
ah indeed it's always the eyes for me I think thank you for sharing your thoughts ❤️
Re. in the end
14th Aug 2023 6:33pm
Beautiful expression of the ebb and flow of emotion.
Triggered feelings of melancholy.
💜
Triggered feelings of melancholy.
💜
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Re: Re. in the end
15th Aug 2023 00:56am
Re. in the end
14th Aug 2023 9:37pm
Wow! At least you were captivated by this person, crimsin, while it lasted. I find you captivating, by the way. 😊
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Re: Re. in the end
15th Aug 2023 00:57am
hello dearest Billy yes and I think things have a way of passing but it's never true for me I tend to hold people close to my heart thank you my friend 💕
Re. in the end
14th Aug 2023 9:47pm
Re: Re. in the end
15th Aug 2023 00:58am
Re. in the end
14th Aug 2023 10:47pm
This is a very well crafted poem with excellent meter and schemes. It is also highly sensual and romantic without a hint of lasciviousness. Good writing.
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Re: Re. in the end
15th Aug 2023 00:59am
thank you graciously dearest poet good afternoon I deeply appreciate your sexy thoughts 💕
Re. in the end
15th Aug 2023 00:18am
As bittersweet as it is, having found someone (however long) who inspires such beauty is a gift. Lovely 🤗
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Re: Re. in the end
15th Aug 2023 1:00am
hello beautiful Willow it's true...really it was admiration on my end and that won't end...it's just hard not to bond with those we write with romantic or not... thank you my friend 💕
Re. in the end
15th Aug 2023 2:02am
Poetry is so personal. Being swept away even just for a reading feels good.
Never mind writing with someone. The mating of the minds!! Creating word children and
stanza families. hahah
Hope that makes sense. LOL
You do hold immortality in your grasp:)
You just left a beautiful example of it with this write.
Never mind writing with someone. The mating of the minds!! Creating word children and
stanza families. hahah
Hope that makes sense. LOL
You do hold immortality in your grasp:)
You just left a beautiful example of it with this write.
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Re. in the end
22nd Aug 2023 2:14pm