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in retrospect
to commiserate
to make
something
immortal
to believe in,
to celebrate
hoping that such
thoughts, feelings,
remembrances,
acts will make
us immortal
fuck it all
finished my smoke
laid down to take
afternoon nap
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Re. in retrospect
14th Aug 2023 2:55am
Re. in retrospect
14th Aug 2023 3:19am
Lol amen!
This is epic, really! I love the write and the attitude that it reaches. Kinda brilliantly obvious but you are the one to bring it to light.
Awesome.
This is epic, really! I love the write and the attitude that it reaches. Kinda brilliantly obvious but you are the one to bring it to light.
Awesome.
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Re: Re. in retrospect
14th Aug 2023 4:26am
Thank you, Styxian. Your kind words are deeply appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. in retrospect
14th Aug 2023 4:55am
hello beautiful Kitty my wish is that I would have the chance to explore space vast and infinite why not immortality? I believe I will get a chance... this is very solemn... here's a song...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aUJuwNxNUWQ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aUJuwNxNUWQ
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Re: Re. in retrospect
14th Aug 2023 1:56pm
Re. in retrospect
14th Aug 2023 5:02am
Re. in retrospect
15th Aug 2023 1:08pm
I think your ink makes you immortal ...At least I hope like hell you live on in all the meaningful, passionate, angsty, profoundly real, sexy and sometimes painfully wise observational truisms you have created here...I know you'll live on fondly within my own (probably many others here) warm memories.... that's really something... Are my thoughts...
(I believe napping is next to godliness... lol. I love how a cat nap can completely make over my piss poor sour mood... It's like magic)
Thanks for the read, bk .. it made me think and deeply appreciate.
🌹💙 - x
(I believe napping is next to godliness... lol. I love how a cat nap can completely make over my piss poor sour mood... It's like magic)
Thanks for the read, bk .. it made me think and deeply appreciate.
🌹💙 - x
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Re: Re. in retrospect
15th Aug 2023 2:40pm
Many thanks, my dear Blue. I cannot adequately express what your friendship means to me.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. in retrospect
16th Aug 2023 4:33pm
Sometimes continuous self-improvement feels overwhelming. It's better to be truthful to oneself, than to be religiously applying someone else's (ultimately randomly selective) religion.
To me, self-honesty is a solid foundation for an authentic life, which is rare, and leaves a genuine legacy in the minds of those who crossed your path. Therein lies your immortality in our collective consciousness. {sorry, that was a bit of a mouthful - what it means is I like your poem :)) }
To me, self-honesty is a solid foundation for an authentic life, which is rare, and leaves a genuine legacy in the minds of those who crossed your path. Therein lies your immortality in our collective consciousness. {sorry, that was a bit of a mouthful - what it means is I like your poem :)) }
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Re: Re. in retrospect
17th Aug 2023 9:44pm
I love what how you said it , actually.
Thank you, Josh.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Josh.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. in retrospect
22nd Aug 2023 1:57pm
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