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Known
You are known.
Felt within every fiber of my nerves.
Insatiable stars in my eyes.
I need you deeply vast.
Wanting you will be the last
thing I do.
My celestial cells shriek your name.
My heart a padded vault where I remain insane.
You are,
Felt within every crevice of my brain.
Known
in my bones.
Felt within every fiber of my nerves.
Insatiable stars in my eyes.
I need you deeply vast.
Wanting you will be the last
thing I do.
My celestial cells shriek your name.
My heart a padded vault where I remain insane.
You are,
Felt within every crevice of my brain.
Known
in my bones.
Published 13th Aug 2023
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13th Aug 2023 2:30am
Dear D,
There is a great deal of intensity throughout this poem. Such love and desire rolled into one. I enjoyed the energy you evoke. H🌷
There is a great deal of intensity throughout this poem. Such love and desire rolled into one. I enjoyed the energy you evoke. H🌷
Anonymous
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13th Aug 2023 11:18am
13th Aug 2023 11:33am
Your poem is great
Enjoy reading your verses
And it inspired me to write something
Enjoy reading your verses
And it inspired me to write something
13th Aug 2023 11:49am
That's wonderful. I get inspired by many writers on here too. I'd like to check out more of your writing.
Thx for stopping bye! 🤗
Thx for stopping bye! 🤗
13th Aug 2023 3:16pm
13th Aug 2023 4:09pm
Perhaps. It's more me imagining I had that kind of soul gripping connection.
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