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Pirouetting With Shadows - with adagio
From darkened pine needles
of trees widowed leaves
pirouetting with shadows
dancing on onion skins
with ghosts of Autumn
embedded in footprints
touching the bark bones
awakening an infancy of silence
dancing on onion skins
of trees widowed leaves
pirouetting with shadows
dancing on onion skins
with ghosts of Autumn
embedded in footprints
touching the bark bones
awakening an infancy of silence
dancing on onion skins
Published 6th Aug 2023
Author's Note
A morning collaboration with my friend. 😊
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6th Aug 2023 6:04pm
hello beautiful Debbie and Adagio this is really, really great I love it
the word choices work really well together to set a tone 💕
the word choices work really well together to set a tone 💕
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7th Aug 2023 11:02am
That was such a nice compliment. Thank you so much from us both. You made my morning. 😊
7th Aug 2023 4:11am
Dear D and A,
Hearty congratulations to you both for a very cool write. I enjoyed the subject and the blend of your voices. H🌷
Hearty congratulations to you both for a very cool write. I enjoyed the subject and the blend of your voices. H🌷
7th Aug 2023 11:04am
Hi! Thank you so much from us both.
So glad you stopped by to read.
We much appreciate. 😊
So glad you stopped by to read.
We much appreciate. 😊
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