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It's Only Fair
Some men will scoff or criticize
A girl my age should be more wise
But just like mom I want to share
What god has given, it’s only fair
A girl my age should be more wise
But just like mom I want to share
What god has given, it’s only fair
Published 6th Aug 2023
Author's Note
My therapist helped me understand that that exhibitionism is a problem in women as well as men. She didn't pursue addressing it since other issues were more pressing. Finding this photo of me from a time I was trying on mother's dresses prompted this write.
In this poem I use the word "god" as a stand in for Mother Nature.
In this poem I use the word "god" as a stand in for Mother Nature.
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It's your heavenly endowment via your parents, I would say to the poem, though perhaps restrict the exhibiting to consenting company. Love the concise rhyme.
I recall seeing this picture on one of your mother's poems about you.
Some people may judge this "exhibitionism", others might excuse this as "happiness in one's skin". Depends on eye of the beholder.
I recall seeing this picture on one of your mother's poems about you.
Some people may judge this "exhibitionism", others might excuse this as "happiness in one's skin". Depends on eye of the beholder.
6th Aug 2023 7:35pm
Yes, I remember she wrote about me trying on one of her dresses. I'll have to look back through them and find that one.
I hope your "happiness in one's skin" is most of my diagnosis. Time will tell.
I hope your "happiness in one's skin" is most of my diagnosis. Time will tell.
7th Aug 2023 6:50am
Presently on leave from work, I'm hoping to go skinny dipping - but it will be on a designated naturist beach among the like minded.
6th Aug 2023 2:35pm
I've had relationships with several exhibitionists. I like to admire and compliment, they have a need to show.
It works
Nothing wrong with it ...
It works
Nothing wrong with it ...
6th Aug 2023 4:34pm
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22nd Aug 2023 7:17am
Wonderful to read words that flow honestly and waltz with the truth !!! I really like !!!
