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A Cautionary Tale Of Survival
lessons not learned
from the heartaches of love
it slices deeper
lost in the shadows
where loneliness bites harder
tears flow much faster
yesterdays have gone
leaving too many empty
spaces ~ that are dark
hanging ~ on to these
broken dreams ~ as if i need
the pain ~ to survive
from the heartaches of love
it slices deeper
lost in the shadows
where loneliness bites harder
tears flow much faster
yesterdays have gone
leaving too many empty
spaces ~ that are dark
hanging ~ on to these
broken dreams ~ as if i need
the pain ~ to survive
Published 26th Jul 2023
Author's Note
4 senyrus spliced together
written a year ago
written a year ago
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26th Jul 2023 5:46am
I like the order you put these in. They combine to remind us of universal experiences we all likely feel in different ways. I get what you mean about needing the pain. Great write.
26th Jul 2023 8:05am
Another senryś masterpiece and outstanding poem within in a poem, Colin. Letting the pain become a sort of lighthouse, directing traffic, so to speak, is relatable and deeply felt.
You know exactly how much I enjoy your senryś and their impactful gravitas, these are wonderfully crafted examples why.
Thank you for sharing yourself with us 🙏🏻
🌹💙
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You know exactly how much I enjoy your senryś and their impactful gravitas, these are wonderfully crafted examples why.
Thank you for sharing yourself with us 🙏🏻
🌹💙
x
26th Jul 2023 10:14am
26th Jul 2023 12:02pm
26th Jul 2023 12:43pm
After I read your poem I read just the words in bold print and my heart ached in unison with yours. So damned relatable.
You always just know. And while I applaud your poetic voice, I understand the pain and want to acknowledge how hard it may have been to be in the space to write this.
Thank you for always bearing your truth to us.
I love this, Colin.
You always just know. And while I applaud your poetic voice, I understand the pain and want to acknowledge how hard it may have been to be in the space to write this.
Thank you for always bearing your truth to us.
I love this, Colin.
