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Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
I Love You
Like roses bleed the color red
Blooming velvet petals of flesh
Gifting bouquets of life
Consummating consonants
as we vocalize the vowels
Words held our hands
until our hands held us
in physical sentences
Like the sky breezes into the blue
Creating fingers of soft air
Tracing your silhouette
Leading to night, candlelight
exposing skin above shadow
Like day once brightened us
now we lay heightened
Like the sun kisses skin into gold
With patient warm lips
Tinting flavors of you
Mouths tripping over tongues
Forgiving cigarette breath
and Spanish onions
for the sake of instant rapture
because tonight is now
and not tomorrow
Like parched soil wishes for
Spring rainbows
Brightening your soul
Like love, the storm before
that makes the dell turn lush
Like the blush, as our faces grace
the warmth of the other
Like tides sing to the moon
In harmony with midnight
Serenading you to sleep
'Til the beckoning of awake
early, for time is winding
our bodies into currents
joining, the luxury of our limbs
as our kisses reach for shared breath
~
I wrote this for you
But life is hard
Decided to keep it for myself
And yet here we are
words settled down
on the night table
as we serenade with sounds
our previous dreams.
Like roses bleed the color red
Blooming velvet petals of flesh
Gifting bouquets of life
Consummating consonants
as we vocalize the vowels
Words held our hands
until our hands held us
in physical sentences
Like the sky breezes into the blue
Creating fingers of soft air
Tracing your silhouette
Leading to night, candlelight
exposing skin above shadow
Like day once brightened us
now we lay heightened
Like the sun kisses skin into gold
With patient warm lips
Tinting flavors of you
Mouths tripping over tongues
Forgiving cigarette breath
and Spanish onions
for the sake of instant rapture
because tonight is now
and not tomorrow
Like parched soil wishes for
Spring rainbows
Brightening your soul
Like love, the storm before
that makes the dell turn lush
Like the blush, as our faces grace
the warmth of the other
Like tides sing to the moon
In harmony with midnight
Serenading you to sleep
'Til the beckoning of awake
early, for time is winding
our bodies into currents
joining, the luxury of our limbs
as our kisses reach for shared breath
~
I wrote this for you
But life is hard
Decided to keep it for myself
And yet here we are
words settled down
on the night table
as we serenade with sounds
our previous dreams.
Author's Note
My first collaboration with the talented and Super Sexy Styxian. haha
aka my happy place:)
aka my happy place:)
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Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
22nd Jul 2023 9:54pm
WOW! Words settled down, huh? I'm glad you both refused to keep this write to yourselves. It's stunning, really. It's not just the romantic descriptions but this feels like a celebration of words in the way they are able to carry a feeling. Breathtaking. Bravo!
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Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
22nd Jul 2023 10:07pm
Hey Billy!!
Words have a mind of their own. We edited one of my older pieces.
I'm glad you enjoyed this. I'm always a little nervous collaborating. I've never really done it - officially. Thanks for your props!!
Words have a mind of their own. We edited one of my older pieces.
I'm glad you enjoyed this. I'm always a little nervous collaborating. I've never really done it - officially. Thanks for your props!!
Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
22nd Jul 2023 10:07pm
It's only fitting that we combine something in writing. Especially seeing how you finish my sentences for me (correctly, nine out of ten times!). At least I don't always spazz and stutter huh. Lol.
You bring me peace of mind! And etc etc. Lol
You bring me peace of mind! And etc etc. Lol
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Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
22nd Jul 2023 10:36pm
It was a great choice to blend this poem.
Thank you for that!
Finishing your sentences is a pleasure btw.
You didn't bail on me through it all.
You know what I'm talking about:)
You bring me peace and happiness and all that
sappy stuff as you would say:)
Thank you for that!
Finishing your sentences is a pleasure btw.
You didn't bail on me through it all.
You know what I'm talking about:)
You bring me peace and happiness and all that
sappy stuff as you would say:)
Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
22nd Jul 2023 10:43pm
Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
22nd Jul 2023 10:50pm
Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
23rd Jul 2023 2:57am
Omg, you two make me squish in the place a heart should be! I fucking adore this collab!
Happiness looks good on you Adel, and the poetry? Darling…. (chef’s kiss). It’s an exquisite piece, and you two blend beautifully
Happiness looks good on you Adel, and the poetry? Darling…. (chef’s kiss). It’s an exquisite piece, and you two blend beautifully
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Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
Hi Betty!
We have such different writing techniques but everything else fell into place. I wasn't sure which poem we were going to use but I'm so glad we went with this one.
Leave it to Mark to compare me to an onion and make me feel beautiful at the same time. LOL
He always made me feel happy but now it feels amplified.
Thanks you so much for the chef's kiss Betty:)
Truly appreciated!!
P.S. I'm a huge Japanese Anime fan!!
I watch Crunchyroll and Funimation when I can. LOL
Digging your avatar!!
We have such different writing techniques but everything else fell into place. I wasn't sure which poem we were going to use but I'm so glad we went with this one.
Leave it to Mark to compare me to an onion and make me feel beautiful at the same time. LOL
He always made me feel happy but now it feels amplified.
Thanks you so much for the chef's kiss Betty:)
Truly appreciated!!
P.S. I'm a huge Japanese Anime fan!!
I watch Crunchyroll and Funimation when I can. LOL
Digging your avatar!!
Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
23rd Jul 2023 2:31pm
Echo all the above great comments
This is a merge to the center
Two hearts 💕
BIG
This is a merge to the center
Two hearts 💕
BIG
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Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
28th Jul 2023 2:43am
Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
23rd Jul 2023 8:22pm
Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
28th Jul 2023 2:44am
Hi Debbie:)
Thank you!
Was a little nervous doing the collaboration.
I'm so happy you enjoyed
Thank you!
Was a little nervous doing the collaboration.
I'm so happy you enjoyed
Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
24th Jul 2023 1:54am
You both are celebrating the joys of bliss together. Keep on writing both of you.
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Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
28th Jul 2023 2:46am
Hi Cisco
We wiill! Was a little nervous about collaborating but
I'm really proud of it:)
Thanks for the encouragement.
We wiill! Was a little nervous about collaborating but
I'm really proud of it:)
Thanks for the encouragement.
Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
28th Jul 2023 7:53pm
Hey girl! I already commented over on Styx's post but I thought I would come over and have another read. :) I am so glad you found your happy place. It looks so good on you! and you deserve nothing but the best. Your words flow together so beautifully... It is truly adorable and I am so happy for you both! :) X
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Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
30th Jul 2023 11:39pm
Hi Kristina!!
Thank you so much for you're good wishes. He's been my life line the past year. Wasn't sure how the collaboration was going to turn out but I am truly proud of it:)
I get a bit intimidated by collaboration. But he made it easy.
Thanks again for stopping by.
Don't be a stranger chica!
Thank you so much for you're good wishes. He's been my life line the past year. Wasn't sure how the collaboration was going to turn out but I am truly proud of it:)
I get a bit intimidated by collaboration. But he made it easy.
Thanks again for stopping by.
Don't be a stranger chica!
Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
26th Sep 2023 4:42am
Enjoyed reading this. A bit late to the party. Collaborations can be challenging especially if you have different styles. I like the challenge and collabs have pushed my writing in good ways. Interesting how the outcome can be very different from expectations when starting out with a write. Good to step out of the comfort zone occasionally. 🌹
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Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
1st Oct 2023 9:17pm
Hi Trillium
I like comfort zones. LOL
It's really hard to get me out of them. But he convinced me to go for it.
He's a great writer - how could I not try. And it turned out great!
Thanks for the read:)
I like comfort zones. LOL
It's really hard to get me out of them. But he convinced me to go for it.
He's a great writer - how could I not try. And it turned out great!
Thanks for the read:)
Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
1st Oct 2023 11:31pm
What about my comfort zone that you barged right through like you own it! Lol.
Okay okay, maybe I opened the way.... ;-) You used the secret weapon. Humor!
Okay okay, maybe I opened the way.... ;-) You used the secret weapon. Humor!
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Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
1st Oct 2023 11:38pm
hahahah!
Yes - I barge through things. That is pretty accurate.
It's like you know me or something. LOL
You're pretty funny yourself big sexy!!
Yes - I barge through things. That is pretty accurate.
It's like you know me or something. LOL
You're pretty funny yourself big sexy!!
Re: Re. Vidalia - Collaboration with Styxian
1st Oct 2023 11:43pm
In biblical terms, we definitely "know" each other. But I wanna know you more. Lol.
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