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Paper Planes
Whispered words
Skybridge lines
Igniting my jet engine eyes
Floating into my mind
Fueled by paper planes
Can't wait to read
In lightning speed
Bypassing the sun
Don't burn me down
Transcend my flight
Erase my turbulent life
Blast me off first class
Towards cloud movie screens
Watching us in weightless fog
Worshiping each other
Fingertips and figure eights
A plethora of skin
Intertwined loops
Skimming eternity
Laying side by side
In laughing afterglow
Drifting forever
An airless writing trip
Folded paper planes
That never crash
Skybridge lines
Igniting my jet engine eyes
Floating into my mind
Fueled by paper planes
Can't wait to read
In lightning speed
Bypassing the sun
Don't burn me down
Transcend my flight
Erase my turbulent life
Blast me off first class
Towards cloud movie screens
Watching us in weightless fog
Worshiping each other
Fingertips and figure eights
A plethora of skin
Intertwined loops
Skimming eternity
Laying side by side
In laughing afterglow
Drifting forever
An airless writing trip
Folded paper planes
That never crash
Published 22nd Jul 2023
Author's Note
Thought how we write poetry on paper and how it can take us places.
The connection between people - lovers - muses - and writing
listening to Metric - Enemies of the Ocean
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XJPlpKIoKBU
The connection between people - lovers - muses - and writing
listening to Metric - Enemies of the Ocean
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XJPlpKIoKBU
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22nd Jul 2023 9:32pm
WOW! Love this! Paper planes are also quite green, right? Haha. There's a lot going on here but yeah, one of the takeaways I got from this is how words do travel into other people's hearts, romantically even. :-)
22nd Jul 2023 9:51pm
Hey Billy!
thank you. thank you!!
The power of words is a mighty one my friend.
You got what I was trying to convey in this piece.
Traveling with your mind is awesome. For me it is anyway.
thank you. thank you!!
The power of words is a mighty one my friend.
You got what I was trying to convey in this piece.
Traveling with your mind is awesome. For me it is anyway.
22nd Jul 2023 9:35pm
Hello Del, long time no see.... Lol.
And yes! You used plethora!!! Big points baby! Dammit, I forgot the other key words. My mind goes numb at times...
This is so wonderful to read, obviously. The ideas and imagery are done in your unique way.
What can I say really, you already know!
And yes! You used plethora!!! Big points baby! Dammit, I forgot the other key words. My mind goes numb at times...
This is so wonderful to read, obviously. The ideas and imagery are done in your unique way.
What can I say really, you already know!
22nd Jul 2023 10:02pm
Hey Styx!!
I had to use it!! It's been on my mind cause you kept
using it!! Too funny.
The other word was . . behoove!! See I remember everything
just like you said. lol
I love imagery and metaphors so yeah - had great inspiration with this write. hehehe
I had to use it!! It's been on my mind cause you kept
using it!! Too funny.
The other word was . . behoove!! See I remember everything
just like you said. lol
I love imagery and metaphors so yeah - had great inspiration with this write. hehehe
22nd Jul 2023 10:22pm
22nd Jul 2023 10:24pm
23rd Jul 2023 2:34pm
28th Jul 2023 2:48am
hahaha!
What makes you think he hasn't. LOL
I will pass along the message anyway.
Hot Sauce needs new shoes!!!
Thanks for stopping by!
What makes you think he hasn't. LOL
I will pass along the message anyway.
Hot Sauce needs new shoes!!!
Thanks for stopping by!
24th Jul 2023 1:52am
28th Jul 2023 2:49am
Hi Cisco:)
You are correct!
Poetry and love are
like french fries and ketchup!
they go hand in hand.
You are correct!
Poetry and love are
like french fries and ketchup!
they go hand in hand.
