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Drive
He likes
it
better
when he’s
balls
deep
driving me
closer
to the
edge
of
insanity
nipples
pinched hard
standing
to his
attention
and
drawn upon
as his
hot
wondrous
mouth
latches
onto me
until
I’m
gushing & gaping
dripping
with his
hot & sticky
love
notes
impaled
upon his
crown.
it
better
when he’s
balls
deep
driving me
closer
to the
edge
of
insanity
nipples
pinched hard
standing
to his
attention
and
drawn upon
as his
hot
wondrous
mouth
latches
onto me
until
I’m
gushing & gaping
dripping
with his
hot & sticky
love
notes
impaled
upon his
crown.
Published 18th Jul 2023
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18th Jul 2023 9:38pm
Wow, I would have driven into a ditch! I enjoyed this poem - there was a wildness to it. Felt the exhilaration similar to the speeding down a curving road. On the edge! The descriptions you provide feeling every bump and slide on the road.
Love the pic.
Love the pic.
You give a very erect feel with such glossary; you know how to use.
Perfect vibration of organic sensation..
and the picture is the last blow !!
Perfect vibration of organic sensation..
and the picture is the last blow !!
19th Jul 2023 00:23am
19th Jul 2023 2:14am
From the picture, takes the reader on a wild sex drive. The dark haired woman could imaginably be Jane Birkin (the female half of the Jet'aime song), who has died recently. (Don't know if her other halves were similarly tattooed to the man.)
Favourite chunk:
driving me
closer
to the
edge
of
insanity
nipples
pinched hard
standing
to his
attention....[would well fit the picture]
Favourite chunk:
driving me
closer
to the
edge
of
insanity
nipples
pinched hard
standing
to his
attention....[would well fit the picture]
21st Jul 2023 6:17am
It was so exciting to read you again after so long. I've been away for quite a while and just reacquainted myself with DUP and the pets I like a couple weeks ago.
This is a fantastic, sexy, erection causing poem! Wild, free, joyful, lustful, deadly
This is a fantastic, sexy, erection causing poem! Wild, free, joyful, lustful, deadly
1st Nov 2023 3:01am
