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An impressive piece of erotic writing. So much of what passes for erotica is really just porn, but this is definitely erotica. The use of clever metaphor and teasing to hint at and heighten sexual feeling is what makes it so.

Thank you so much, Mr. K.

You wrote the ache, exquisitely.
First stanza, stellar writing. 💜

Thank you, lovely. I appreciate you.

BIG

All that needs to be said

💯

Thanks!

Fuck!

You use ichor in a poem in 2023, I will stand with you when the cultists come in hordes. It's that simple.

That's all you had to say.

One more thing: I was that man many times. My therapist told me I had a saviour complex. My acting coach told me to go trace the journey to the moment I died emotionally. I did all that. These days I read poems and pretend-live. Cause when I love, I bring in the terror and ache along with it. Cue: This is not a drill.

"I sat curled in my own wreckage." Fuck. Don't make me fall in love, will ya?

Aw, nerd, you know you've loved me for like twelve years.

Ditto, my lovely friend. Me, too.

Ichor, bile, all of the vast grotesqueness that we force into the people who love us. There really is no defense when someone chooses to embrace you. At least not for them, amIright?

Thanks, my beautiful soul. I appreciate you.

This spoke to me in so many ways. Wreckage indeed. It fades with time.
At least that’s what I’ve been told …
I’m in love with this poem.

Thanks Her,

I know you get me, and I'm happy-sad of it. Happy because to be understood is awesome; and sad, because you have take hits to get it.

You're amazing.

Thank you for picking that up.. I appreciate your insight and your review, ethan. YOU are a badass.