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As it is
You are a bit drunk tonight
do you think it helps you
to focus on what might
have been or could be
You are a bit drunk tonight
do you think you can hold on
to this man, the wanderer
who has his own lust
for something more
than just you?
You were always a fool
for love
Grace, get sober
and get the hell into
your lonely bed!
do you think it helps you
to focus on what might
have been or could be
You are a bit drunk tonight
do you think you can hold on
to this man, the wanderer
who has his own lust
for something more
than just you?
You were always a fool
for love
Grace, get sober
and get the hell into
your lonely bed!
Published 18th Apr 2012
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18th Apr 2012 00:18am
Anonymous
18th Apr 2012 00:38am
the first thing Noah did when he landed was plant a vineyard...so he could drown his sorrows in wine because all his friends had drowned.....
good poem
Kitty
good poem
Kitty
18th Apr 2012 9:28am
Oh yes, of course, nothing like a drink to drown the sorrow and get a hangover afterwards...haha! thanks for being here Kitty.
Anonymous
18th Apr 2012 1:01am
I love the deep emotion I get in the pit of my stomach reading this-powerful write, peace x Thank's
18th Apr 2012 9:29am
18th Apr 2012 1:33am
Oh grace he's a loser for obvious reasons and nice short powerful write by the way :)
18th Apr 2012 9:30am
You know, Paul: you never know what you had until you lose it. I hope he feels that way...at least. Thanks for reading and commenting.
