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Peacock Affirmation
Who needs you peahen
Taking my plumage elsewhere
I'm magnificent
Taking my plumage elsewhere
I'm magnificent
Author's Note
Photo taken yesterday at a wildlife park. Angle and movement used as prompt..
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Re. Peacock Affirmation
1st Jul 2023 00:04am
Peacocks and Peahens are awesome birds!
In my youth when i worked on a cattle ranch in northern California,
right before a storm i'd hear loud crying that sounded like human babies and the seasoned hands would tell me that those are wild Pea Birds and they always cry out before a storm.
Your spill here, caused me to remember that evening.
thank You for sharing
In my youth when i worked on a cattle ranch in northern California,
right before a storm i'd hear loud crying that sounded like human babies and the seasoned hands would tell me that those are wild Pea Birds and they always cry out before a storm.
Your spill here, caused me to remember that evening.
thank You for sharing
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Re: Re. Peacock Affirmation
1st Jul 2023 00:30am
Ooh, cool memory. Glad you found value.In my little haiku.
There were also some white peacocks.. Hard to say which is more beautiful.
There were also some white peacocks.. Hard to say which is more beautiful.
Re. Peacock Affirmation
1st Jul 2023 2:22am
I once fed wild peacocks cat food from my hand. There was a white peacock who ran after us then just stood there in full plumage. It’s one of my most memorable days. They truly are magnificent creatures.
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1st Jul 2023 4:52am
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1st Jul 2023 10:21am
Re. Peacock Affirmation
4th Jul 2023 8:31am
Re: Re. Peacock Affirmation
4th Jul 2023 10:48am
Thanks. I did intend for it to tell a little story about his strikeout a the singles bar.
Re: Re. Peacock Affirmation
4th Jul 2023 3:14pm
Haha I also thought of using your poem as a retort to hilariously reject a pestering bar drunk. You got your point across
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