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Depth
There’s no depth to words
Unless we can understand
The message behind
Published 29th Jun 2023
| Edited 30th Jun 2023
Author's Note
I’ve never been good at Haikus
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29th Jun 2023 9:59pm
Well this one is certainly an exception because it's a killer gut punch of perfect brevity, Walter.
No muss no fuss... stark no holds truth!
Loved this senryú, it's message is loud and clear.
Terrific work
🌹 B
No muss no fuss... stark no holds truth!
Loved this senryú, it's message is loud and clear.
Terrific work
🌹 B
30th Jun 2023 11:32pm
Being brief has never been my forte. I know haikus may be easy to write but having depth itself is a challenge.
Thank you
Thank you
30th Jun 2023 1:37pm
30th Jun 2023 11:34pm
30th Jun 2023 2:08pm
Agreed. Some scirbers want to be soooooooooo smart their message is undecipherable.
1st Jul 2023 1:08am
