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Re. Unperceptive Demise Of Self-Respect
25th Jun 2023 6:00pm
A lot of depth to unpack here in just a few words, so you should know that you are respected for that. Abstractions aplenty immediately upon reading, as the idea of fading silence doesn't seem possible until you learn just how loud the silence can be, and that pride can and will ultimately lead to self-defeat. I like this wording with "unrequited heartbeat"....I hadn't thought of it that way before, one heartbeat to follow the next....one day at a time. It will take some degree of self-perception and awareness to gain enough self-respect to learn that too much self-respect can be far more destructive than too little. Deep & simple, just the way I like it.
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Re. Unperceptive Demise Of Self-Respect
25th Jun 2023 6:18pm
well after reading your well constructed comment
it come as a surprise
there was no concious
thought into poem itself
the way i wriite
it come as a surprise
there was no concious
thought into poem itself
the way i wriite
Re. Unperceptive Demise Of Self-Respect
25th Jun 2023 7:39pm
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Re. Unperceptive Demise Of Self-Respect
26th Jun 2023 5:22am
Dear AP,
This write so aptly defines my state of being just now I could weep. Lovely and deeply meaningful write. H🌷
This write so aptly defines my state of being just now I could weep. Lovely and deeply meaningful write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Unperceptive Demise Of Self-Respect
26th Jun 2023 8:43am
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Re. Unperceptive Demise Of Self-Respect
26th Jun 2023 3:58pm
Always felt, yet, I had to say something
never read such powerful wisdom in
so few words. Hit the mind, soul, and heart
never read such powerful wisdom in
so few words. Hit the mind, soul, and heart
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26th Jun 2023 5:29pm