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A soul Cries Out
A Soul Cries Out
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A soul cries out
This too shall pass
Get over it
Wallow in your own misery
A soul cries out
How about a doughnut?
Or watch some TV
You'll feel better in the morning
A soul cries out
I love you, but
It's not my problem
I've got my own
Just be strong
A soul cries out
You need help
A soul cries out
Who really cares?
They just want your money
You are a dollar sign in pain
A victim of an uncaring society
A soul cries out
A soul cries out
How do you think I feel?
A soul cries out, a soul cries out
Angry, frustrated, speak not
It hurts
A soul cries out, a soul cries out
A soul cries out
Pain, loneliness, anguish
Sadness, hopeless, worthless
Drowning in negativity
The light extinguished
Where is the light?
A soul cries out, a soul cries out
A soul cries out, a soul cries out
A soul ... you have to think about other people
it's not just about you
A soul cried out.
by
A soul cries out
This too shall pass
Get over it
Wallow in your own misery
A soul cries out
How about a doughnut?
Or watch some TV
You'll feel better in the morning
A soul cries out
I love you, but
It's not my problem
I've got my own
Just be strong
A soul cries out
You need help
A soul cries out
Who really cares?
They just want your money
You are a dollar sign in pain
A victim of an uncaring society
A soul cries out
A soul cries out
How do you think I feel?
A soul cries out, a soul cries out
Angry, frustrated, speak not
It hurts
A soul cries out, a soul cries out
A soul cries out
Pain, loneliness, anguish
Sadness, hopeless, worthless
Drowning in negativity
The light extinguished
Where is the light?
A soul cries out, a soul cries out
A soul cries out, a soul cries out
A soul ... you have to think about other people
it's not just about you
A soul cried out.
Published 24th Jun 2023
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30th Jun 2023 7:58pm
I feel the repetition takes this vibe away from the poem,
I found it more intriguing without the words "the soul cries out"
But it's a good read...
Beautiful ✍️
I found it more intriguing without the words "the soul cries out"
But it's a good read...
Beautiful ✍️
4th Jul 2023 8:50am
I actually like the repetition and where you started it but stopped with “you have to think about other people it’s not just about you”
And that’s usually how it goes, we’re so consumed with self during these times.
Great read.
And that’s usually how it goes, we’re so consumed with self during these times.
Great read.
