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Honeysuckle
Honeysuckle smells deeper
After June’s violent rain
Dogs bark incessantly
At echoes of themselves
Sofa sailors gaze
At reflections of themselves
After the molten sunset
Twilight bruises the sky
Then the moon’s acned face shines
Over wild and sticky fields
Published 21st Jun 2023
Author's Note
Honeysuckle (Thankfully I forgot all about you)
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21st Jun 2023 11:21pm
A truly gorgeous mental picture your ink paints... visceral...
Beautifully done, James.
I've read it a few times now and thank you for sharing it.
🌹💙
Beautifully done, James.
I've read it a few times now and thank you for sharing it.
🌹💙
Thanks for reading,
one night I smelled the honeysuckle. Alone with my dog.
It was a good sensation.
Regards
James
one night I smelled the honeysuckle. Alone with my dog.
It was a good sensation.
Regards
James
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2023 00:51am
it is really nice to hear the poem from your voice
meaningful
meaningful
22nd Jun 2023 12:24pm
23rd Jun 2023 8:11pm
27th Jun 2023 8:07pm
Thank you for reading it,
I think of the moon as an old face, or a young face with acne.
regards
James
I think of the moon as an old face, or a young face with acne.
regards
James
24th Jun 2023 1:33pm
Hello James ♥️
I have to say this piece is thought provoking
especially this >>Twilight bruises the sky<<
I Love the images that flow from this metaphor I just love it.
Write ✍️ on brother !
Jackir xoxo
I have to say this piece is thought provoking
especially this >>Twilight bruises the sky<<
I Love the images that flow from this metaphor I just love it.
Write ✍️ on brother !
Jackir xoxo
27th Jun 2023 8:20pm
Thank you for reading.
Yes I love the twilight. I am always trying to describe it.
thanks for your words of strength
Regards
James
Yes I love the twilight. I am always trying to describe it.
thanks for your words of strength
Regards
James
27th Jun 2023 9:41pm
6th Jul 2023 9:26pm
Awesome descriptions, very poetic wow! Kudos for this superb poem, love the mention of the moon.!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
7th Jul 2023 2:34pm
