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Hope to Cope
It seems all of cruelty's wisdom is continually bestowed upon me.
I will not be infected by a malignancy of pity.
I seek the solace of the forest.
Strength of soul a perpetual test.
My tribulations sit in hunched defeat below the society of trees.
Lulled by empathetic whispers whistling in the leaves.
As lovely is the glorious sky,
It's stubborn blue refuses to reveal the why's.
But the fluffy cotton mountains of clouds provoke hope to cope.
Dopamine tears drop from my suffering eyes.
I will not be infected by a malignancy of pity.
I seek the solace of the forest.
Strength of soul a perpetual test.
My tribulations sit in hunched defeat below the society of trees.
Lulled by empathetic whispers whistling in the leaves.
As lovely is the glorious sky,
It's stubborn blue refuses to reveal the why's.
But the fluffy cotton mountains of clouds provoke hope to cope.
Dopamine tears drop from my suffering eyes.
Published 19th Jun 2023
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19th Jun 2023 1:10pm
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19th Jun 2023 3:55pm
I was right there with you, my friend. The imagery in this poem is outstanding.
I often find solace among the trees.
Well done.
I often find solace among the trees.
Well done.
19th Jun 2023 6:00pm
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19th Jun 2023 6:01pm
22nd Jun 2023 2:39am
You manage to capture a unique expression with what you convey here. "My tribulations sit in hunched defeat below the society of trees.
Lulled by empathetic whispers whistling in the leaves." I enjoyed that part. Like ominous hinterland foreboding of gossip, ha-ha. Again, atmospheric feelings. You're getting more and more seasoned and experienced in such attributes and traits. Another thing I like is your compounding and expounding concepts of the direction you take your works in. You seem to be doing well with managing to get detailed, as well as grand, in the levels of detail. That can really help you in shaping the transitions of your expressions and all. Focusing on being detailed when needed, as well as looking at the bigger spectrum when needed. Keep putting the work in. You can never be "too" inspired. Hope this helps. Take care!
Lulled by empathetic whispers whistling in the leaves." I enjoyed that part. Like ominous hinterland foreboding of gossip, ha-ha. Again, atmospheric feelings. You're getting more and more seasoned and experienced in such attributes and traits. Another thing I like is your compounding and expounding concepts of the direction you take your works in. You seem to be doing well with managing to get detailed, as well as grand, in the levels of detail. That can really help you in shaping the transitions of your expressions and all. Focusing on being detailed when needed, as well as looking at the bigger spectrum when needed. Keep putting the work in. You can never be "too" inspired. Hope this helps. Take care!
Thank you so much. I love reading your feedback. I learn things, lol. Things I'm not able to see as the writer. I totally appreciate you taking the time to provide such awesome feedback. 😎
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22nd Jun 2023 3:11am
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22nd Jun 2023 10:37am
Hi! Great to hear from you. I do find so much peace in nature. I notice everything, lol. Thank you for the blessings, I surely need them and appreciate. 💜
