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Liquid Love
just the thought of you
has me on my knees
starved for every drop of you
letting you feel the vibrations
hum between my lips
holding you there
on the edge
for as long as I can
stroking you firmly
my throat purring
calling forth your climax
until the pleasure erupts
and the electricity
rushes across your skin
as your sweet honey
fills my mouth
and I am intoxicated
from your liquid love
has me on my knees
starved for every drop of you
letting you feel the vibrations
hum between my lips
holding you there
on the edge
for as long as I can
stroking you firmly
my throat purring
calling forth your climax
until the pleasure erupts
and the electricity
rushes across your skin
as your sweet honey
fills my mouth
and I am intoxicated
from your liquid love
Published 11th Jun 2023
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12th Jun 2023 00:32am
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12th Jun 2023 7:42pm
Warm picture painted of an oral session. The title tempted me to read, wondering if the liquid would be female or (as here) male.
12th Jun 2023 7:44pm
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30th Jul 2023 00:36am
The only intoxication I'm getting lately is from my liquid lunch. I would much rather have what you're having. Nicely written. Steamy! ;-)
30th Jul 2023 00:49am
30th Jul 2023 00:53am
Pretty good thanks. It's nice to read some invigorating poetry, like here, with you. I'd ask how you are but I feel I already know. :-)
30th Jul 2023 00:55am
I'm glad you're good. I hardly make my way here these days, but thought I'd stop in tonight. Thank you for the lovely compliment!
Anonymous
20th Aug 2024 9:21am
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