Two Quips of a Stone

Nice concepts of balance and duality here.  You draw some interesting analogy based on the metaphors you use.  The emotion and morality are captured well here.  My favorite is "two blades in a war."  I feel as though that's a compact way of summarizing such a thing, especially in the format and style you use.  Pretty unique, individual, original, and creative   There is also a succinct method about how these transitions of symbolism take shape, this that is aesthetically pleasing.  Overall, I enjoyed it.  Thanks for sharing.

Thanks. I’m tinkering with format a bit. Trying something different than what I usually do. I do appreciate your input.

The exploration of duality and smoothly sharp rhyme throughout is just beautiful and musically mellifluous. This is a terrific display of skill, has the form of a riddle about it and is quite thought-provoking

Thank you. I’d never considered the riddle aspect but now that you mention it, it seems as so. I had only written one verse and it was settled amidst my collection of random verses. It took a bit to put it all together.

It came together well.

Excellent write my friend
I particularly liked the ‘Two hatches of trust’ stanza. The whole poem has a good flow and some grit in it’s meaning

Thank you Monkeyman. I Appreciate the feedback.