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A Gift (of dark soul and heart)
dominance
is soul
heart
a gift
not readily
given
if at all
trust
respect
love
in equal measure
all have
their say
is soul
heart
a gift
not readily
given
if at all
trust
respect
love
in equal measure
all have
their say
Published 7th Jun 2023
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25 words comp
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7th Jun 2023 7:59pm
I like this. There's much talk of the gift of submission, but dominance is a gift too, in the wonderful context you describe.
7th Jun 2023 8:17pm
The clear and defined agreement of unmitigated trust is imperative within a shared dynamic of any sort. I hypothesize even more so, when it comes to certain individuals that participate in a fetishistic lifestyle but most certainly a Dom/s dynamic. The hope is that solid foundation of trust will eventually allow for the overflow of enormous respect and the sprouting of a deep consequential love. There's nothing more powerful or better, imo. Trust is the backbone on which it's all built and is definitely not something to be taken lightly... Just sayin'...
Excellent minimalism, Colin.
Lovely work.
Good luck in the comp... - 🌹
-B
Excellent minimalism, Colin.
Lovely work.
Good luck in the comp... - 🌹
-B
9th Jun 2023 3:50am
exactly without trust theres nothing
whatwver we do trust is the foundation
whatwver we do trust is the foundation
