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Yearning
She was a broken glass seeking fullness,
hoping someone someday might see her for more than a means to relieve their thirst.
hoping someone someday might see her for more than a means to relieve their thirst.
Published 7th Jun 2023
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Something short & sweet.
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7th Jun 2023 5:47am
Dear DC,
Well done. I found much to relate to in this write and I like the accompanying picture. Supports the poem wonderfully. Welcome to DU.
H🌷
Well done. I found much to relate to in this write and I like the accompanying picture. Supports the poem wonderfully. Welcome to DU.
H🌷
Anonymous
7th Jun 2023 6:52am
Brief, intense, and memorable. Well done.
7th Jun 2023 12:02pm
Anonymous
7th Jun 2023 7:51pm
Hello there
Welcome to DU - I hope you find everything that you need here.
This was such a deep and relatable piece. I’ve been having a few unexpected curve balls thrown at my life recently, and this piece so eloquently describes the futility of a bad situation. I’m so glad that you realise you are worth it in the end.
We are all worth it.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Welcome to DU - I hope you find everything that you need here.
This was such a deep and relatable piece. I’ve been having a few unexpected curve balls thrown at my life recently, and this piece so eloquently describes the futility of a bad situation. I’m so glad that you realise you are worth it in the end.
We are all worth it.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
8th Jun 2023 1:47pm
