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Apple
My body is like a ripe apple
It has fallen beneath your feet
Please use me as you please.
It has fallen beneath your feet
Please use me as you please.
Published 21st May 2023
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22nd May 2023 00:59am
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22nd May 2023 5:57am
"Please use me as you please" - but not under your feet I might have added.
22nd May 2023 6:10am
For me, it goes against the poem of giving total control over to the other person plus I wanted to leave it to the reader's imagination to add whatever they wanted.
Thank you for your feedback always :)
Thank you for your feedback always :)
