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Away
I went to your words dear
They had been retreated
You are away now for natural causes
I kind of missed you
The moist of your emotions
And how you wrote them
A silent reader
On a corner of the world
I kind of hoped to enter in you again
And hear about your lover.
They had been retreated
You are away now for natural causes
I kind of missed you
The moist of your emotions
And how you wrote them
A silent reader
On a corner of the world
I kind of hoped to enter in you again
And hear about your lover.
Published 21st May 2023
| Edited 2nd Sep 2023
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2nd Sep 2023 3:04pm
This write is worth bringing to the front of the line. It reminds me of a writer sitting in a smokey New York pub, mid 60s perhaps. -Not that I was ever there. Yet I can appreciate the nuances that were found in such scenarios, as this does.
Well done. And definitely enjoyed reading it.
Well done. And definitely enjoyed reading it.
5th Sep 2023 5:45pm
