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Two boys talk out loud outside your window
You can hear their voices
The door opens and closes
A man coughs
A man sneezes
You get up
An abrupt notification on your phone
A dog barks
You wonder whether you should leave your house
Is it safer here?
In the haunted house.
You can hear their voices
The door opens and closes
A man coughs
A man sneezes
You get up
An abrupt notification on your phone
A dog barks
You wonder whether you should leave your house
Is it safer here?
In the haunted house.
Published 14th May 2023
| Edited 16th May 2023
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Your writing is peculiar but sometimes strikes a chord and has an interesting unique rhythm all your own. The details, quick fire in a sparse economic format is impacting.
5th Sep 2023 8:49pm
